Friday, June 20, 2008

In response to Rachel's friend Canadian Carla

Please Press.

Jeneanne, you bounce you roll you hop
You paint with the brightest colors the boldest strokes
You were a tree with a smile
The overgrown pixie.
Negative never
Jeneanne, everyone knew your joy
A college kid to the fullest.
A kid in college
to teach us something.
I wish I knew where you are today

1 comment:

Casey said...

Great imagery, but the two lines (about 3/4 the way in) that repeat college twice seem a little odd...doesn't flow as well as the other lines.

Also, I love the line about the tree with a clear and uplifting...makes the person really seem inspirational :)