Jeneanne, you bounce you roll you hop
You paint with the brightest colors the boldest strokes
You were a tree with a smile
The overgrown pixie.
Negative never
Jeneanne, everyone knew your joy
A college kid to the fullest.
A kid in college
There
to teach us something.
I wish I knew where you are today
Jeneanne.
1 comment:
Great imagery, but the two lines (about 3/4 the way in) that repeat college twice seem a little odd...doesn't flow as well as the other lines.
Also, I love the line about the tree with a smile...so clear and uplifting...makes the person really seem inspirational :)
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