Friday, June 20, 2008

In response to Rachel's friend Canadian Carla

Please Press.

Jeneanne
Jeneanne, you bounce you roll you hop
You paint with the brightest colors the boldest strokes
You were a tree with a smile
The overgrown pixie.
Negative never
Jeneanne, everyone knew your joy
A college kid to the fullest.
A kid in college
There
to teach us something.
I wish I knew where you are today
Jeneanne.

1 comment:

Casey said...

Great imagery, but the two lines (about 3/4 the way in) that repeat college twice seem a little odd...doesn't flow as well as the other lines.

Also, I love the line about the tree with a smile...so clear and uplifting...makes the person really seem inspirational :)